Chunk works. Western comics and English in general have poor sound effect conventions, so if you can come up with a distinct but descriptive sound effect with only 5 letters, you've done well.
Good choreography, but the POV switches are a little abrupt. I feel like one less POV changes would have been perfect.
In the 4->5->6 sequence I got confused as to which hand was being grabbed, since by then there had been a total of 4 180 degree changes to POV, 1 90 degree change to POV, and one overhead closeup.
This one is actually pretty good, it would just flow past me if I wasn't paying attention, but if I intentionally look for errors it makes my head hurt.
You could always just take two pans from your kitchen and bang them together. Or have a friend hold one and you both band them together like you're fighting. I've been told they sound pretty similar to swords clashing.
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Chunk works. Western comics and English in general have poor sound effect conventions, so if you can come up with a distinct but descriptive sound effect with only 5 letters, you've done well.
Good choreography, but the POV switches are a little abrupt. I feel like one less POV changes would have been perfect.
In the 4->5->6 sequence I got confused as to which hand was being grabbed, since by then there had been a total of 4 180 degree changes to POV, 1 90 degree change to POV, and one overhead closeup.
This one is actually pretty good, it would just flow past me if I wasn't paying attention, but if I intentionally look for errors it makes my head hurt.
30th Jan 2020, 7:57 AM
I know for a fact I've done better combat scenes, man. This one just wasn't my best, I guess.
Hopefully the next one won't be so screwy xD But as long as the choreography is good, that's ok!
Plus: I agree, English onomatopoeia is crappy.
30th Jan 2020, 12:36 PM
You could always just take two pans from your kitchen and bang them together. Or have a friend hold one and you both band them together like you're fighting. I've been told they sound pretty similar to swords clashing.
25th Jun 2020, 2:42 PM
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