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Bandkanon

Bandkanon Bandkanon said:

fun fact: My favorite pages tend to be the ones that I DON'T comment on.

This one gets a comment because I hate it.

29th Jan 2020, 9:53 PM

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Redpine

Redpine Redpine

I can see why you dislike this one. Panels 1&2 look like they belong in the previous page, the sliding sound effect of panel 3 is too quiet, the viewing angle change to panel 4 is abrupt, and the two voice bubbles in panel 4 are clearly spoken by the same person - but one of the bubbles points to the Ghost, the other bubble looks like it points to Leer.

Keep in mind I don't draw or study drawing, so take any criticisms with a grain of salt.

30th Jan 2020, 7:40 AM

Bandkanon

Bandkanon Bandkanon

Nah I totally getcha. x'D

I'll try to keep it in mind for the near future and... if I ever come back and redo this chapter.

30th Jan 2020, 12:33 PM

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